Friday, November 22, 2013

Self Review

     So far I am quite satisfied with my draft. I know that I have to lengthen it but I already have some ideas on some more information that I'm going to research.
     I feel that so far I have presented pretty well (with some help at the writing center). I am planning on digging deeper into my subject and possibly expanding it to involve all aspects of music and the brain. By that I mean seeing if there has been any research done about how music effects someone with special needs, and how music can be therapeutic to people in harm. I also want to see if there is any extensive knowledge about music and alzheimers patients.
     I feel that I have a really good start on my paper and hope all of yours are coming along well!

1 comment:

  1. Sydney, extremely interesting topic you chose. In my study concerning autism I do remember an article concerning music therapy as one variation of therapy styles. l hope you can find information on this. I would be interested in reading your finished paper. I was for the first time not upset with my paper during the review. I think I have shown considerable improvement over my previous attempts.

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